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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
Battered, senseless sudden weightlessness he shakes but won't be waking any time soon he used his voice and was condemned sentenced to life after death for his free-thought secretly they envied him for his strength secretly they hated him for his difference secretly they admired him for being himself secretly they killed him for trying to save them.... |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
i really like this one. i like how it showed what happened but with out "his" knowing. [side note] it reminds me of the story of jesus but thats just me. keep righting |
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Why Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32Middle of nowhere |
This was a great poem.I have to agree with Deep_Inside it sounds much like the story of jesus.keep up the good work |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
no matter what i do...... |
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