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Petey
Junior Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2003-09-23 11:31 PM

What Do You Think?

(Male)
What do you think of me?
When I make a move
Do you wish to flee?
What do you do
When I say
What I think of you?
Do you adore the way
I stare at you,
Admiring your face?
Why do you quickly look away
When I look into your eyes?
Deep down do you abhor me?
Or is it just your love in disguise?

(Male)
What do you want to see?
Me make a like a tree,
Not to stay around, but leave?
Or do you want me to tarry,
Holding you forever,
Hoping we'd marry.
Do I make you swoon,
When I say my love
Couldn't be more true?
When I say
There's nothing we can't do?
So what do you think of me?
Is it something we have in common?
Is it something on which we agree?

(Female)
I wish I was in love
With you for future years.
I'm sorry I make you
Walk this Trail of Tears.
This may sound harsh,
But I mean you no harm.
I'm not attracted to your looks,
Nor to your charm.
I hope you can move on.
That this darkness in your heart
Will turn into dawn.
MY heart soars for another.
I will hope yours will too.

(Male & Female)
What do you think?
Of this world and of this life?
Love is as sharp as a knife,
And hard as diamond.
It will pierce you to the heart.
And leave a wound that will not heal.
You cannot avoid it,
Sometime you'll feel.
It will take you so high,
In a world so surreal.
And leave your heart dry,
And dropped down to the dust.
You'll invest all your faith.
Just to have one break your trust...

© Matthew Peterson 2003

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-09-25 11:02 PM

I enjoyed this it was very good..hmm Im just thinking about it still maybe ill add to my comments later
-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

2 posted 2003-09-26 01:32 PM

this was awsome i reallly enjoyed reading it. the linking of the two and how it cam together. you have a real talent keep tighting

[This message has been edited by Deep_Inside (09-26-2003 01:33 PM).]

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-17 05:22 PM

beautiful. good write.

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