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young_blood
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since 2003-09-19
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0 posted 2003-09-23 03:41 PM



beyond life

another day, still the same
turning down a broken road
friends left behind
in a dust of a failed past
i cant be looking behind me
beacuse the path ahead is unknown
im stumbling over the events from today
catching myself upon my one solid Rock
i lean on Him who never leaves
who stays no matter the cost or pain
never seing this One who lives inside
but im being caught when i fail again
is this really a blind faith
when signs around me abound?
no, this is merely trust
trust in Him who takes care of me
im becoming crafted and molded to
what i need to be
this path is becoming smoother
the One beside me guides me
i can see the end of the road ahead
the grand finale, its beyond here, beyond life.

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-10-04 02:25 PM



"is this really a blind faith
when signs around me abound?
no, this is merely trust
trust in Him who takes care of me"



Yes...trust...smile...
Love this, young_blood...oo beautifully said.
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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2 posted 2003-10-04 02:33 PM


*hugs* don't stop trusting... as soon as you do, your life will fall apart *big hugs*

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-11 01:12 AM


hmmmm, not seeing, the true test.  good write.
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