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I've lost you... (revised repost from Open)

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Master
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0 posted 09-23-2003 03:42 AM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Iíve lost you, havenít I?
I wonít acknowledge it.
My words fall silently
like autumn foliage.

Inside an empty church,
where mass just ended,
Iím Christ, whose open arms
now hang suspended.

Love flourishes and fades.
Alpha - Omega.
One day, a god; the next --
a homeless beggar.

Perhaps, itís for the best, --
no love -- no jealousy.
Wash down my farewell kiss
with sips of Hennessy.

Weíve loved each other, dear.
How can this love be over?
The cold receiver falls
as though an old revolver.


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[This message has been edited by Master (09-23-2003 03:58 AM).]

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cherrys_rule
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since 03-18-2006
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1 posted 10-06-2006 01:33 PM       View Profile for cherrys_rule   Email cherrys_rule   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrys_rule

Man this was really good. I was very Amazed by your work. I hope to see you more on here. Thanks for sharing with us.
              Courtney
the_girl_next_door
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2 posted 11-08-2006 10:22 PM       View Profile for the_girl_next_door   Email the_girl_next_door   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_girl_next_door

I am also amazed by this. This was beautifully written. I'm not sure why no one else has replied. The part about you being Christ maybe be sort of controversal but if the person understands the poem they will see that you meant nothing of a greater sense by it. This was great.

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

secret_truth_lies
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3 posted 12-25-2006 11:53 AM       View Profile for secret_truth_lies   Email secret_truth_lies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secret_truth_lies

this was really good. I have to agree with everybody else. Nicely written. I also hope to see more from you very soon. HAve a happy holiday to everybody
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