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since 2002-07-01
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0 posted 2003-09-22 06:01 PM



I wish I was..
Dead
Death
eating away at every flawless smile,
eating holes through my hands.
I wish I was..
Alive
Living
Cracking out of my shell,
Breaking through the glass.
Breathe,
Sadness,
Excitement,
Never forget to breath.
The Zombie of my life is awake...

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair


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Posts 696
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1 posted 2003-09-23 01:55 AM


wow! This was so unique! Automatic points for that! Such an intensity about it too, very well written. An unusual writing style it took me a minute to get used to that but other than that I was completely blown away.
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

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since 2002-07-01
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2 posted 2003-09-23 05:59 PM


Thank you
aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
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Australia
3 posted 2003-09-27 06:17 AM


life and death...... nice combination.... this was short and sweet.... nice way of putting your emotions.... keep it up.
aussie

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since 2003-09-26
Posts 32
Middle of nowhere
4 posted 2003-09-27 11:46 AM


that displays the feelings of many people I know including myself. thank you
dertah
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since 2003-06-18
Posts 584

5 posted 2003-10-17 05:37 PM


zombies are cool.....
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