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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
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0 posted 2009-01-07 06:44 PM


sorry if the rhyming isn't great.

Pain and agony
Hurt and lonely
Despair and suffering
Shes been hurting
Crying to herself all the time
It eats her like a crim
Friends to others
A loving mother
A loving sister to cast
Ao ashamed to talk of the past
Doens't know how to start
Without making it tart
She cant lose anyone
Or the world will run
So she goes on with the days
With a smile painted on her face

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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

1 posted 2009-04-24 02:35 PM


i really liked this poem. i can really relate
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