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Dark Poetry #4

Crimson Leaf - Redo

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

0 posted 2008-12-15 05:33 PM

Crimson Leaf

Crimson leaf
   Holding strong.
      Full of life
         It won’t be long…
Until fall arrives.

Chill aches leaf’s shell
   Now decayed
      With crusty skin.
         Tree’s living veins
Are wearing thin.

As like a knife
   Cut from the tree
      Leaf must fall.
         Support is gone
With windy brawl.

Swirling thrust-
   Lands swift and pained
      On pavement black.
         Encased in dread.
Leaf can’t go back.

         Alone and dead.

Wrote this and worked on it more after a good friend went back to using this week - almost 2 yrs clean-*sniff*  ~P

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

1 posted 2008-12-18 10:36 AM

well im sorry to hear about your friend
i think the poem is actually amazing
it looks like other wont reply to your poems but meybe cuz they want the catching and fun to listen poems but i respect that you write of your feelings and make it strong.

*kudos*

britt

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

2 posted 2008-12-19 12:42 PM

Thanks britt. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it - I write about the feelings, the things that happen to me in my life because it is a form of therapy for me, do you know what I mean? I think you do!

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