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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
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0 posted 2008-12-13 05:01 PM



What would you do if the sky turned blue
& you were there to watch it all fall through?
What whould you do if you had to stand and watch  teh world come to an end?
Would you gaze with amazement as everything
around you slowly began to crumble & burn?
Would you run and hide terrified for what
would be to come?
Cry, laugh, or be filled with unbearable silence,
as it all suddenly vanished.
No warning, no time just a rumble that shakes
the earth, the ground begins to slip,
and you just can't move, paralyzed.
A scream that seems to come from the middle
of the world. Gives your back chills & sends
your mind into a frightful fit of wondering.
Blackness swirling all around, all signs
of noramality gone.
What would you do if you were all that was left here?

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Vestibular Bard
Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284
New York
1 posted 2008-12-13 05:03 PM


I'd probably write a lot of dark poetry...

Anyone got a pad and pen I could borrow?

Dangit!

The Esoteric Being
Junior Member
since 2008-07-22
Posts 34
MA, USA
2 posted 2008-12-14 11:17 AM


i can hear this one in my head as a heavy metal song... sounds quite good!
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