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Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-12-09 07:38 PM

The worlds mourning the loss
of someone so unknown.
The clouds cry tears of blood,
as she seeks out her revenge.

I wonder what death she suffered,
for her to take her action on.
It must've been tragic,
since the clouds are crying blood.

Suffocation took its toll on her,
while she silently screamed in agony.
All this pain and horror loved her dearly
as she longed for peace and kindness.

A simple act of selfless harm
was taken apon her fragile frame.
The quiet room was once a haven,
until the clouds cried her blood.

Drip drip drip,
they're crying...
Drip drip drip,
she's dying...

While death arrived she looked on,
into the face of her fate.
Frozen in the dadly silence...
we'll all mourn her death.
so this one had a drawing that i did with it, it was red swirls with flowers and stars coming off of it. clouds were also attached to the swirls while raining blood into a small pool on the ground. in the corner of the page there's also a blood stained sunshine shining brightly.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

1 posted 2008-12-09 07:48 PM

its supposed to say "deadly", oops!

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

axi
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since 2008-11-16

Posts 43
NewYork

2 posted 2008-12-12 10:28 AM

i would love to see the ARTWORK that went with this poem...when i don't want to express myself with words, i will draw instead....if you have a scan of it, please send it over or let me know where i can see it...

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

3 posted 2008-12-12 05:09 PM

haha, okay. i'll try and post it to my deviantart page when i have a chance.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-12-12 10:30 PM

Great detail hun. And I can't wait to see your drawing!!

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

5 posted 2009-01-08 10:38 AM

hey everyone who read my poem...the link for the drawing is:
http://tantalizedbaker.deviantart.com

its the first one under the recent deviations.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

waiting for you to notice me, touch me, hear me, love me...ask me for something other than gum.

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