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NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09
Posts 107


0 posted 2008-11-13 02:47 AM


i dream a sad dream
It is a painful
It hurts me to breathe
already burnt out
in her heart an ugly flower is withering
plagued to die
when i was sane
mourning for this sorrowful child
here with now and never
It is shameful
the razor lines she cuts into my eyes
Like this day Life seems unnecessary
unknown because of the world
things don't go according to reason
These imperfections lead in all directions
When I pretend
I die like living
Wounds don't grasp recovery
The forgotten response
It's a cruel red scar
That had been stitched shut
Misplaced
Your freedom's wings are already closed
and you're sleeping
Innocent days slipping farther away
The first memory is vanishing
i Fear that time will break me
if i awaken from this dream
that's killing me
Can i do it right this time
can i return to who i was before
a beautiful flower
Singing solace to this silence
Without saying goodbye to yesterday
Past the yearning, can I learn to temper my sorrow
As my life slips through my hands,
I feel the warmth in my heart lessen

[This message has been edited by NormalitxButterfly (11-13-2008 09:52 AM).]

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Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2008-11-13 05:48 AM


That's a very intense poem, I had goosebumps when I read the razor line, I hope you find your beautiful flower and it returns to full bloom, Be safe..
axi
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since 2008-11-16
Posts 43
NewYork
2 posted 2008-11-18 10:31 AM


one word....CHILLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSS....thnx 4 sharing
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