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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-11-03 11:37 PM



Should the skies

Cloud forever

Raging seas

Bleed much redder

Solemn winds

Forewarning change

Day rescinds

In to darker strange

Eclipse of soul

No light to follow

Dying a slow

Existence so hollow

Truth no longer

Nothing survives

Aimless to wander

Longing to die...


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c2008 vduna



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The Esoteric Being
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since 2008-07-22
Posts 34
MA, USA
1 posted 2008-11-05 12:51 PM


Nice imagery, I enjoyed this.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-11-05 02:55 AM


Dear Victor, this reflects your dark mood powerfully. A longing to die every now and then afflicts us, when we feel separate from the Whole, ultimately it is a longing for LOVE. And God being Love, it is a longing for God/Spirit Divine.

You are loved.

Love,
Margherita

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