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Persephone
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since 2008-10-30
Posts 8
Ireland

0 posted 2008-10-30 09:51 PM


Dried of all sugars,
Moistened in my own weakness.
My knees rattle with these delusions of worth
That you bring, and I demand.

The chapters forever shall be,
My world without end.
With this numbness strung rigid
Through my aching ears and eyes.

Am I worth this?

Am I worth less?

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Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
1 posted 2008-11-19 06:04 AM


the only delusion you have is that your worthless.

and with writing like this, you're gonna be attracting plenty of people that agree with me.

if you're worth anything, it's a new chapter.

good luck and keep on posting. i hope it helps to write it out. i know it helps me.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

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