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My one true love

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 10-27-2008 08:56 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

It just sits there, waiting for me

Waits to feel my fingers, waiting to breathe

As a start to touch it, I hear every note

A single sound everytime afloat

At first it can be soft and grow louder with feeling

And I just wonder, whats the true meaning?

The ones that I play, are the ones that I feel

And if you ask me, yes its real

My fingers on the keys

My feet on the petals

I love the way it sounds, even if its only metal

The sound I get when playing just a tune

I always think I hope it won't be over soon

So I play till my fingers can't feel anymore

So I turn off the light, then I close the door

One last look at my beautiful baby

I'll see you tomorrow, it would say

As if I can't wait for you to play me

So as I leave and say goodbye

I think about what I'll play

When I next arrive


*This poem is about my love for playing the piano I love how it makes me feel and hope you can relate it to something that you love also* V2BH


Kate

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midnightdreamer
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1 posted 10-27-2008 05:21 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i cant say i have tht feeling. but very awesome word choice!

Midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

voice2bheard
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2 posted 10-28-2008 11:21 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you like always glad you like it!!

Kate

Persephone
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3 posted 10-30-2008 04:25 PM       View Profile for Persephone   Email Persephone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Persephone

I don't play the piano personally, but I can agree on that it is a beautiful tool of music and it can be simply breathtaking to listen to. I'm really impressed that you wrote this poem, it's so refreshing to read a poem about the love of a passion. And I think your style of writing is cool aswell, definitely keep it up (along with z piano )
voice2bheard
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4 posted 11-18-2008 02:24 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

thank you im glad that you like it! hope to write more and hear from everyone who likes my work

Kate

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5 posted 11-24-2008 09:46 AM       View Profile for The Esoteric Being   Email The Esoteric Being   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Esoteric Being

the way you expressed your true love definitely leaves an impression
voice2bheard
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6 posted 11-25-2008 11:01 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thank you I'm glad that you like it, its very hard these days to find something that you're truely passionate about you know?

Kate

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7 posted 12-16-2009 03:55 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

yes the piano!! and I still love it!! Forever and Always!!

Kate

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