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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-10-27 08:56 AM

It just sits there, waiting for me

Waits to feel my fingers, waiting to breathe

As a start to touch it, I hear every note

A single sound everytime afloat

At first it can be soft and grow louder with feeling

And I just wonder, whats the true meaning?

The ones that I play, are the ones that I feel

And if you ask me, yes its real

My fingers on the keys

My feet on the petals

I love the way it sounds, even if its only metal

The sound I get when playing just a tune

I always think I hope it won't be over soon

So I play till my fingers can't feel anymore

So I turn off the light, then I close the door

One last look at my beautiful baby

I'll see you tomorrow, it would say

As if I can't wait for you to play me

So as I leave and say goodbye

I think about what I'll play

When I next arrive

*This poem is about my love for playing the piano I love how it makes me feel and hope you can relate it to something that you love also* V2BH

Kate

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-10-27 05:21 PM

i cant say i have tht feeling. but very awesome word choice!

Midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2008-10-28 11:21 AM

Thank you like always glad you like it!!

Kate

Persephone
New Member

since 2008-10-30

Posts 8
Ireland

3 posted 2008-10-30 04:25 PM

I don't play the piano personally, but I can agree on that it is a beautiful tool of music and it can be simply breathtaking to listen to. I'm really impressed that you wrote this poem, it's so refreshing to read a poem about the love of a passion. And I think your style of writing is cool aswell, definitely keep it up (along with z piano

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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2008-11-18 02:24 PM

thank you im glad that you like it! hope to write more and hear from everyone who likes my work

Kate

The Esoteric Being
Junior Member

since 2008-07-22

Posts 34
MA, USA

5 posted 2008-11-24 09:46 AM

the way you expressed your true love definitely leaves an impression

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

6 posted 2008-11-25 11:01 AM

Thank you I'm glad that you like it, its very hard these days to find something that you're truely passionate about you know?

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

7 posted 2009-12-16 03:55 AM

yes the piano!! and I still love it!! Forever and Always!!

Kate

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