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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2008-10-27 08:43 AM


I, have not deceived you for so long in time

For why have there been such a dark spell cast upon me?

For thine eyes to see with such greatness or obseen?

I long to hear your voice in my ear

Saying such sweet words I once thought long ago

To be able to sense that you are near me once again

With passion, to breathe, to think, to see

A love I once had, fell upon me

A hatred so strong that not even love can endure

The songs I used to sing, at a time I was so sure

To hear the sounds just ringing in my head

But ever so sosftly, almost as if dead

For these shadows I seem to walk upon

For the longest time, I just wish to evade

To reach out, and to finally touch you

To hear you voice, thats ever so true

A time when I would shine in the light

A light that was clear, ever so bright

To live in my own words and not the past

My life in thine shadows, I long to evade at last

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 2008-10-27 08:45 AM


This poem is about pretty much summing up my life that I do need to move on and make big and better things with my life. I hope someone out there likes it!!!

Kate

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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2 posted 2008-10-27 05:18 PM


i don't just like it i love it. hope tht counts
midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2008-10-28 11:19 AM


Thanks I know you always like my work!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 2009-12-16 03:56 AM


LOOKING BACK NOW I CAN'T BELIEVE I WROTE THIS!! AND I STILL LOVE IT!! XOXO

Kate

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