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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut

0 posted 2008-10-21 07:47 PM



I’ll prove you wrong
I’ll live through it
The pain is bearable
It still burns when I think about you
You drilled right through me
You thought you knew me
I’m telling you this now
Because later you won’t listen
I’ve hurt and broken
I thought you’d be there
You only carved your own hole
You said you knew me
When you weren’t even close
Yes what you did hurt me
I should’ve told you
My heart was already sealed away
I guess what I’m trying to tell you
In so many words
Is that
You only strengthen me
Yes I’ll all ways have your scar
It sits with the others
I’ve got something special
And you just made me so far
I’m your worst enemy now
I wish I could change for you
I want to tell you
I’ll always love…..in a way.

Love is hate
And hate is love
I hate you

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

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The Esoteric Being
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since 2008-07-22
Posts 34
MA, USA
1 posted 2008-10-22 07:38 AM


this one holds so much truth for me, very nice work.
I had trouble understanding this line:
"And you just made me so far"

you just take me so far? you made me this way?

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The Esoteric Being

midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-10-23 05:20 PM


it was suppose to be "You've ruined me to far" thx for the comment. sorry about the feeling

midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

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