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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
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Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-10-14 04:03 PM



this poem i write for school and won in a rap contest with it its basically a poem of what i think he would say as a hero to me...enjoy!

i have the biggest heart around
even ask my mother after all she out me down
but i still forgave
still tell this day im crawing out that grave
what to say
what to do
ooops! i must have fooled you
you might think im the best man here
but let me make this clear
your feelings can you express
my feelings i will confess
but you hold it inside
you can win, when you never tried
you gotta break free
you wont get the best of me
you can cry in sorrow
theres a brigter tomorrow
but think of it this way
troubles can come any other day
but you gotta fight back
if you lack
and your the 1st to go
becuase of things you dont know
but nobodys totally real
believe me i know how you feel
noones true
becuase i know you hurt to
but you cant beat me
trust me i have one of the worse cases in history
but love who you are
take life to the far
make a story to be remembered
tell a life that is considered
we will remember you for you
and thats all you can wish to do


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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
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1 posted 2008-10-14 04:13 PM


Dare I say,
That was a lovely poem

-Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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