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Melissa Inside
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since 2008-07-19
Posts 13
Baltimore

0 posted 2008-09-20 07:17 PM




one hundred souls float through the air.

one hunded lost, broken souls that mean
    nothing to anyone now.

one hundred pairs of hollow eyes look
    past these one hundred souls.

one hundred pairs of eyes that do not
    see, or do not wish to see, what
    truely lies beyond the grave.

one hundred people belonging to the
    one hundred pairs of eyes, slave
    away day in and day out.

one hundred people that spend their
    lives working hard, only to spend
    their deaths floating in the wind.

one hundred lives, belonging to the
    one hundred people, are wasted.

one hundred lives spent sulking and
    slaving rather than enjoying the
    simple pleasures that only life
    can bring, while they still had
    the chance.

one hundred corpses slowly loosing
    heat, and pulling away from their
    one hundred previous lives.

one hundred corpses that are no longer
    of any concern to the world above
    and are soon forgotten.

one hundred souls float through the air.

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midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-09-21 01:03 PM


great poem.

midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no feat but rather welcomes it.

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