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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2008-09-06 02:13 PM


Your tongue
touches your lips
drawing back in
the taste
of all the sickness
and self satisfying garbage you type.
and it makes me
angry
to listen to anything but your poetry.


"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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SlowlyFallAway
Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
North Carolina
1 posted 2008-09-07 10:13 AM


I loved this! It was short, but awesome. Sometimes all we like to hear is poetry, whatever sounds good. Loved it.
silhouetted
Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand
2 posted 2008-09-09 03:21 AM


oh my god

wow

amazing.
what and ending!
blown away.

as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have.

Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2008-09-09 01:41 PM


Thanks you two.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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