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Revon
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0 posted 2008-08-29 11:48 PM



Trying harder then I ever should
Begging more then I ever would
The question asked as I stared
The awnser is you never cared
As I shed a pain drenched tear
Finally it comes crystal clear
Every word you said was a lie
You could care less if I live or die
I trusted you with my unbroken heart
I should have realized you’d break it from the start
I’m not good enough, I will never be
This is why you can’t love me
With you honestly never got me far
Remember baby, you will always be my favorite scar
- My favorite lie was the one where you said you love me. - Unknown

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1 posted 2008-08-30 03:56 AM


"- Unknown" Does that mean you didn't write the poem?

Revon
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2 posted 2008-08-30 10:19 AM


Errrr sorry. The unknown is a quote. I wrote up to the -.
NormalitxButterfly
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3 posted 2008-08-31 12:38 PM


i like it.
"you will always be my favorite scar"
that part caught me.

ladylisa
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4 posted 2008-09-02 09:06 AM


I liked this poem.  It represents a lot of people and how they are lied to and used.  Lis
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Roy,ut
5 posted 2008-09-05 10:04 PM


this reminds me of..me.

midngihtdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

midnightdreamer
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6 posted 2008-09-05 10:15 PM


Great poem though!!!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

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