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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-08-15 10:11 AM



who to ask who to blame

am i crazy or am i sane

who knows not me

just want him to see

me for who i am

to see things from where i stand

for him to be the bigger man

for him to grab my hand

and say everything will be okay

listening to the words i have needed to say


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HeliaHeart
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since 2008-11-16
Posts 53
Georgia
1 posted 2008-11-26 06:44 PM


What a question to ask!
I've always felt that their is little sanity within all of us... I mean just look at the world around us! Tell me the human race is not insane for what it has done to itself over the years, and the impositions and sterotypes are stifling.
Really, are any of us sane, at all?
Very nice...  


~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
2 posted 2008-11-26 07:52 PM


Hmmmm..People call me insane all the time, but it just leads me to belive that the majority of the world is crazy and the ones that are supposedly sane are truly the insane ones.
Ethan Halo
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
3 posted 2008-11-27 09:06 PM


not knowing how someone may feel can drive you crazy... but you're not crazy for wanting to know.

if it makes you feel better, insane is a legal term, not a medical term.
even if unrequited love drives you insane, there's nothing medically wrong with you.

it just sucks. :\

i enjoyed the poem. wistful, musing, and inquisitive. some of my favorite feelings.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

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