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NormalitxButterfly
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0 posted 2008-08-10 03:47 AM



" a silent reminder.... just because "

The roses at my window
they have long since withered
yet i keep them still
a silent reminder
i too once bloomed
and have long since withered
yet i remain
a silent reminder
" just because" you said
" just because"
is there no true reason?
even so i remain
soon the roses will turn to dust
will i reamain?
a silent reminder
you keep me still
though i wither more each day
never to bloom again
a silent reminder
" just because" you said
" just because"
there is no true reason

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1 posted 2008-08-10 11:33 AM


Butterfly~
This is a lovely piece of poetry~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Mystress May
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2 posted 2008-08-11 03:26 AM


Butterfly.... this is a beautiful piece. It's not dark at all.... perhaps a bit sad but it's not at all dark. I enjoy it.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

NormalitxButterfly
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3 posted 2008-08-14 11:27 PM


thanks for taking the time to read
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