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Veni Mortem Junior Member
since 2008-07-31
Posts 43 |
I’m not in the position to control my thoughts Anguish comes naturally now, no problem The pain is laughing and the light is crying The music stopped and the bliss is dying This peace they said would never last It won’t go away, even after I cut it! This life they said would never last It won’t go away, even after I cut it! When have you ever been right?! Pain is calling to me It wants to laugh, too! Sad is calling to me It wants to play, too! Sick is calling to me It wants to sing, too! Dark is calling to me Take over, over, sing! Oblivious to the undergoings Lonely black figures surround myself The only thing I can trust in this lie-land Ugly I am I don’t understand what you meant I can’t remember anything The unknown substance on my hands Is remains of my sacrifice in blood I won’t see past any of this! This is my illusionality! I don’t want to remember who I am If it means losing all my friends! Pain is calling to me It wants to laugh, too! Sad is calling to me It wants to play, too! Sick is calling to me It wants to sing, too! Dark is calling to me Take over, over, sing! I tried to get past it all But now that I’m too sad to cry I guess I don’t really have a choice Other than closing my eyes Take two steps and lift the trigger And a flow of pure salvation travels to the end of my mind Only to join my friends? Only to join my friends? Forgive me! My friends are all calling to me! They want to join me, too! Pain is calling to me It wants to laugh, too! Sad is calling to me It wants to play, too! Sick is calling to me It wants to sing, too! Dark is calling to me Take over, over, sing to me as a fall asleep One Last Time [This message has been edited by Veni Mortem (08-02-2008 07:50 AM).] |
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Britt_Brat Junior Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 37Knoxville, TN |
wow this is good. i know the pain as well. cut and bleeding |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Wonderful write ! Ah (((bliss))) (((peace))) (((pain))) (((sadness))) (((sickness))) such beloved fun thoughts ::smiles:: enjoy or... don't and enjoy that. (((Veni))) |
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Melissa Inside Junior Member
since 2008-07-19
Posts 13Baltimore |
i can relate. this is a really good piece, by the way. |
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