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Tyler's Lost Angel
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since 2008-05-21
Posts 5


0 posted 2008-07-23 07:34 PM



rivers long wept run through my heart,
cutting out its initials with every barier broken;
and the child inside me can't help but drown,
lost in the murky depths of others' insults and lies,
every mark torn and scratched into flesh
the one who has failed everyone that matters,
and it is felt like an open wound,
born to forever bleed,
just like how the water continuous flow
until it reaches the safety of the ocean.
the bandages are hard to hide underneath this fragile body
yet showing them means to degrade myself,
to be like the rocks that sink to the bottom
when you toss them into the depths.
its just another knot to hide.
when will i ever reach my ocean?

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Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
1 posted 2008-07-23 08:51 PM


Lost Angel.... is there another name I can refer to you as? or would that suffice?

Beautifully written.... from the soul... I've been there and hate that anyone has to be there. I hope that is from another time and not now. I love your words, doll

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
2 posted 2008-08-04 09:50 PM


stubborness is sometimes a sign of strength...
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