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alan a
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since 2008-07-23
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india

0 posted 2008-07-23 03:27 PM



Why do you, behind curtains, wait,
Before I walk in through your door?
Do you hold, in your hand, a knife,
Or do you wait to scream “Surprise”?


I watch your shadow under moonlight dance,
Ominous, like a vulture’s stance.
Head hung low, your hair alive,
Swaying to breeze on this chilly night.


I imagine your eyes turning red aglow,
And hells fire burning within your soul.
But then I see you step on the sill,
And your shadow leave the curtains.

© Copyright 2008 Alan A. - All Rights Reserved
alan a
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since 2008-07-23
Posts 17
india
1 posted 2008-07-23 04:23 PM


yes, this is suicide, but im not promoting it as a way out of this world...
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-07-23 04:36 PM


this a cool poem. keep up the great work.

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

alan a
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since 2008-07-23
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india
3 posted 2008-07-23 04:39 PM


glad u like...
Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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Taunton, MA
4 posted 2008-07-23 08:47 PM


I like this one even more than the first one I had read, doll.... looking forward to more

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

alan a
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india
5 posted 2008-07-23 11:54 PM


thanx may...
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