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NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09
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0 posted 2008-07-22 09:43 PM



i searched for you for so long
but your eyes were blind
you left me
staring into a broken mirror
looking inside of myself
like you
time seems to have passed me too quickly
the heart that beats within my chest
wants so much to let you in
the scars of today
burning so brightly
its hard tell were one wound starts and one begins
i can only hope to channge the way i see them
when you look at me i feel like i should say i'm sorry

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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-07-22 11:27 PM


cool poem.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09
Posts 107

2 posted 2008-07-24 09:59 PM


thanks

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think

it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's

alrig

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