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Wildfire |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
Wildfire The leafy hues have burned away. Only ashes remain. The hateful flames, conceived by greed have consumed the proud giants. The elder wood, twisted with age, are gone; Their wisdom in flames. Even the common folk have vanished. Elm, Oak, Pine, Spruce... Uprooted and burnt. Neither sapling nor fruit-bearer is spared. Never to be nurtured. Never to bear. Fire consumes all; And leaves only hate. 7/11/08 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Andrew!!! i havent read anything from you for a long along time: good to finally get another good dose  great poem.. and how true too// sigh  Krysti |
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Elias Nevermore Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 152 |
not one of your best, but still pretty good. How have you been Andrew? |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Well written.... but I want more! I feel that this could be expanded upon.... More description.... with the same intensity. Perhaps I'm just greedy hehheeh Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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