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Dark Poetry #4

let it be

millionmiles
New Member

since 2008-07-12

Posts 1

0 posted 2008-07-12 08:33 PM

[hokay - *isnew* =D]

Let it be,
clandestine feeling of misery
clarity's child lost; lost in a sea
of hopelessness.
Waiting to disappear.
Let it be,
wishful thinking: memories
tic tac toe
the game's getting old
Let it be.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-07-13 03:18 AM

Welcome to Passions I really enjoyed your 1st post. i liked the repetition of the 1st and last line
Krysti

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2008-07-18 06:04 AM

I liked this.

Welcome! Hope to read more!

Belief is a beautiful armor but it makes for the heaviest sword.

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