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pyre
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0 posted 2008-07-11 07:34 PM



Pondering and mispelling words
My hair has grown long
And my ignorance undecided
I'm still carrying my cross
On a Jagermeister logo

I'm useless to Jesus unless I'm broken
If He wants to break me
May it be
May I bleed for His name
May it be not if vain

Plastic cushion wraps my neighbors
Black smokey spirits
The narrow path simply dismissed
My nails are red
I wanna understand but I don't comprehend
Steady pounding on my head
At least a few have been fed
If this makes no sense
Accept it as ignorance
Jesus loves all and the fool
Its His blood that saves us all


© Copyright 2008 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-07-29 02:01 PM


Wow. FREAKIN awesome write. Makes me think.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

pyre
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since 2008-05-16
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2 posted 2008-07-30 06:00 PM


thank you,

jesus confuses me...

-pyre

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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3 posted 2008-07-30 06:45 PM


Hey doll.... I'm not a believer but I do love this piece. It's well written and I love it.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

pyre
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4 posted 2008-08-27 07:05 PM


Thank you sweetie...

Does she pray?  Am I prey?  The strength of reality demands honesty and this path is in a shovel...

Temptress
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5 posted 2008-09-08 02:52 PM




Enjoyed reading this.


"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

pyre
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6 posted 2008-09-08 10:08 PM


thank you.

Does she pray?  Am I prey?  The strength of reality demands honesty and this path is in a shovel...

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