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Dark Poetry #4

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NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

0 posted 2008-07-11 01:50 AM

"Untittled"

From my birdcage

I await the setting sun

that for those breif moments

until it rises again

I may wander the night

A free thing

I stare into the murky waters below

It reflects back to me

nothing

a distorted reflection

when the sun rises

I return to my glass birdcage

For not even the night will have me

and so it is everyday I await the setting sun

only to return to this place

I am a sad thing

existin between night and day

belonging to neither

I am but a moment

Forgotten with the next

who will miss me when i'm gone

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think

it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's

alrig

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-29 01:37 PM

Sad and lovely...

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

2 posted 2008-08-08 05:22 AM

a bit sad... but i like reading it. :-)

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

3 posted 2008-08-08 06:29 PM

Great words, great flow.... the whole piece is good. Love it.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

4 posted 2008-08-08 06:41 PM

A beautiful tragidy.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

5 posted 2008-08-10 03:39 AM

thanks for the comments it means a lot

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