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NormalitxButterfly
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0 posted 2008-07-09 03:31 PM


"Shattered doll"


Youre beautiful alone

Sitting there in the corner

Your face a porcelain mask

Covering your up sin

With doll like and innocence

Clutching in your cold fingers three

withered roses

Even though your eyes will never open

~ahhh...My shattered doll......~

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think

it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's

alrig

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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1 posted 2008-07-09 04:19 PM


Interesting. I'm not sure I completly understood that so I might have to read it over a few more times. But great job and welcome to PIP. Hope to see more.

   {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

NormalitxButterfly
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2 posted 2008-07-11 09:29 AM


thanks
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