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fractal007
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0 posted 2008-07-07 04:23 PM


I loved you because you hated me
I opened myself to you, gave you
power over me and in return
you pollinated my life with purpose.

I drove my dagger into you
for the last time felt the life
drain from you, heard you breathe
your last, knew what I'd achieved.

Now I feel only emptiness
loneliness at my lost enemy
hope gushing from me
muddying the ground

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1 posted 2008-07-10 04:48 AM


Kevin you amaze me with every poem i read
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2 posted 2008-07-29 01:17 PM


This is insane. Awesome.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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