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i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24
Posts 108
manila, philippines

0 posted 2008-07-07 05:09 AM



i said im never gonna hurt you,im never gonna make you cry...


but i had a dream and killed you, tasted your blood.
it felt good, the sense of your life pulsing away,
and you, screaming my name. finally i proved,
that i can make you hurt, i can break your heart
i can make you bleed and plead and cause you pain.
i kissed your lips, and the thought of you
in agony sent pure sensations in my skin.
i want more. im filled with pleasure thru your pain


i woke up in the morning inside your arms,with tears i said;
i said im never gonna hurt you,im never gonna make you cry...

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2008-07-07 12:37 PM


Wow...that's kind of scary. It makes me wonder...lol, i loved it

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-07-07 07:20 PM


i love this kind of poems! and your good at them!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2008-07-07 08:05 PM


I enjoyed this poem, especially since I used to like reading about dream analysis.  I wonder, does the speaker's shadow need a bit of exploration ?
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
4 posted 2008-07-29 01:16 PM


This blows me away patch.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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