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i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24
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0 posted 2008-07-04 02:19 AM



ticking
it taunts me,
keeps me awake at night.
stop.
the cold rain's here again.
can you feel it lurking?

today,
i am dead
and nothing else is real.
today
i am dead
what is left for me to feel?

i wish for someone
to stop-
wake me up..
put me back in track.
make me see
it's my life im destroying,
cuz not even the pain
i feel can stop me from breathing..

today
i am dead
and i'm not even real.
today
i am dead
yet i am hurting still..


"all things change, and we must change with them..."


(dedicated to XGarapanX)

© Copyright 2008 Abegail Matias Bernas - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
1 posted 2008-07-04 03:39 AM


This made me cry. Thank you, Patch.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2008-07-04 11:16 AM


Wow, i really enjoyed this patch I'm gonna have to go back and read all of your other posts now...

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

3 posted 2008-07-05 09:58 PM


Nice poem.  It sounds like an addict talking....
Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03
Posts 112
England
4 posted 2008-07-06 11:37 AM


Ouch. I agree with the previous post, it sounds like an addict..but addicted to what.
i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24
Posts 108
manila, philippines
5 posted 2008-07-07 03:57 PM


t'was a mixed feeling of bitterness,
confusion, melancholy..

im sorta addicted too..(for quite sometime)


addicted with pain.
but, being able to talk about it now,
freely, and sharing it with the world and not being scared about the reactions i'll get, i guess, by now, i can proudly say...
i moved on succesfully.
i made a good turn.

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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