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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 07-01-2008 11:25 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for hunnie_girl

Well Paul.. i'm going to try my best but I havent been so dark lately(ITS SUMMER LOL) and well the poems here dont make me feel dark so I am going to pull up the archives and read some of your ol' beauties BRB oka you inspired me

right around midnight
the darkness it falls
waiting in terror
to the spirits calls

alone in his grave
almost, but not dead
trying to get out
by banging his head

a black cat crossing
voodo from some child
19 more people
in the witches guild

they must have summond
the graveyards keeper
he heard the knocking
as he dug deeper

when people showed up
they all knew his fate
he could have been saved
but now it was too late.

ohh.. dear I think i've lost my touch of darkness if i have to write about some alive body in the grave lol.. I think the devil and I need to have another terprsichore as for you Paul good to see you back.. and you better start writing again and give everyone a run for their money:P
Best Wishes
Krysti

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1 posted 07-02-2008 04:42 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Summer and this poem have one thing in common, they are both excellent!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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2 posted 07-03-2008 12:39 AM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

lol thank you
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3 posted 07-03-2008 03:25 AM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Walter Poe

it wasn't me this is an old post. Sorry to scare i just been really busy with things and stuff for quite a while. just seems like one thing after another. since i last talked to you i've moved twice and about a hundred other things have been and gone along the way. My e-mails etc have been all but completely neglected.

Course i missed out chatting but my mind has a habit of jumping around and whenever i was gonna post you or even stick a poem on here i got distracted by something else.

How are you anyway - get back to me please. I'll make time.

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

Falling rain
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4 posted 07-03-2008 07:34 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

This is good.. but strangely its not my favorite.. ya i know, crazy right?.. hmm I guess im not in the mood for ghost stories.. but this is pretty good anyway..

~Zach~

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

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5 posted 07-04-2008 11:02 AM       View Profile for BrittanyJ   Email BrittanyJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BrittanyJ

Wow, kinda creepy if you ask me...But i like it Then again...i always like your work

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

 
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