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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
Talking Texting Wishing I talk to hear you voice I text to stay in touch And text when I can’t say much I wish to rejoice Crying I cry because I live to far Because I wanted to grow up with you Instead I live here and you there Only one visit a year And not for long Two quick visits if we’re lucky I miss you too much I miss you my sisters "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI |
aww very touching but i know how it feels to miss someone you care for or love keep up the great work! |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thx. midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
The thought of this saddens me. You have conveyed the emotion extremely well. Great job. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
thanks!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
That was really...good and sad at the same time. It reminds me of the friends I left when I had to move.  Also, when you wrote," I cry because I live to far", it should say too instead of to. Great job1Alexandra |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Bella.... I enjoy it.... and am glad to see that you're still here! Looking forward to catching up on your work that I've missed.... I've always enjoyed you. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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