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perk45
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since 2008-06-29
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0 posted 2008-06-29 02:09 PM


I'm on a plane
to nowhere.
The skies are cold
and gray.
I'm calling out
to no one.
Don't let me fade
away.

The fuel tank is
on empty.
The hands of time
are full.
My trigger finger
tempts me.
But I refuse
to pull.

Above it all
it's hopeless.
Nothing can be
done.
And on this cloud
i know this.
Closure will nev-
er come.

Heaven is
approaching.
Or is that just
the sun?
The kingdom's light
is blinding.
And now thy will
is done.

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Pluto
1 posted 2008-06-30 10:33 PM


inspiring....
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-30 11:36 PM


W-O-W!! I LOVE THIS! This is amazing, i just..idk it's really good! Deffinetly library. Great job! And welcome to PIP!

                {~~*~~}


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{~Emily~}

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