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midnightdreamer
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0 posted 2008-06-28 07:27 PM



I lie to forget
I lie to protect
I lie but, it never works
I can’t get you out of my mind
It’s like you were meant to be there
Please stop talking to me
I’ve tired, so hard
But failed
I truly want to forget
But something inside of me
Just doesn’t want to let you go
Just tell me to get lost
Save me from my own pain
Save me from hurting you
From hurting myself anymore
This pain inside
Make it go away
By saying just one word
Tell me “bye”

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 2008-06-28 07:56 PM


I hate that feeling. Just went through it myself. Finally convinced the silly creature to gey lost. What a life.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

midnightdreamer
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2 posted 2008-06-28 08:14 PM


yeah i know. actually i'm still trying to forget them.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

Again
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3 posted 2008-06-30 04:50 PM


Yes, I've been there too, and its such a joy to finally get over it. I noticed when I finally got over that bridge, I started wrtiting poetry that is much brighter and full of hope.
midnightdreamer
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4 posted 2008-06-30 08:19 PM


i'm looking forward to that.

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2008-07-02 04:39 PM


It IS hard to forget. I wonder if "never" applies here. There was so much I loved about her, so much beauty, and excellence. Ack! I hope you do better than I do at getting on with things, lol! I laugh, but I am heartbroken. It's a new feeling for me.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

midnightdreamer
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6 posted 2008-07-05 11:39 PM


i think ''never'' can apply here. and sorry.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

GothicCherry
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7 posted 2008-09-25 12:18 PM


i can Truly relate on this one..thank you.
midnightdreamer
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8 posted 2008-09-25 06:29 PM


any time. thx for commenting my work.

midnightdreamer

She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no feat but rather welcomes it.

ken206573
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9 posted 2008-10-22 04:55 PM


i never experinced anything that you have gone throught. yet i did felt sorrow within your poetry. i truly love how it was written. hope to hear more if possible.


Mystress May
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10 posted 2008-10-22 05:29 PM


I truly love this piece, doll!
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