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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
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Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-06-26 07:49 PM



why is life so sick

hard times always seem to stick

when i cant cry my heart out

i cant let go and pout

i will not show the real me

why wont life just let me be

but it will not fade away

i hold it in everyday

as i hope time goes fast

i cannot forgive my past

when my heart grows cold

it just another page in my life to fold

as deep inside i feel my pain

theres nothing in this life for me to gain

as depression takes over my thinking

and so many things peoples been taking

my soul, my heart, my dreams

life is just like it seems

inside i hide this emptiness

in me theres so much darkness

but meybe oneday i can break free

and meybe oneday i can be me


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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
1 posted 2008-06-26 10:17 PM


Amazing. I know exacally how you feel. Library.

    {~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Again
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since 2008-05-13
Posts 47

2 posted 2008-06-27 08:32 AM


This is a really nice read. Its smooth, it rhymes, it has a nice flow to it and although its dark, it has hope in the end =).
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
3 posted 2008-06-28 07:04 PM


i know this feeling.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
4 posted 2008-06-28 10:49 PM


First, I wish to thank you, You have written the truth of so many, Second i wish to tell you that, that was simply stunning, Thank you.

Rebecca

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
5 posted 2008-07-02 04:46 PM


This was a well written and very sincere piece that grabs the heart.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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