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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-06-05 05:05 PM



Deeper down into the darkness,
never will I see more light.
Dragged down by the screams of
the haunted, don't try to save
me because it's too late.
A knife, a cage, and the freedom
to die. Darkned pain, sickend lullaby.
No more light, no more suffering,
only emptyness.
I'm stuck forever, never breathing.

          {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2008-06-09 10:37 AM


Its short and seems quite to the point not bad but are you new at this at all?  

Kate

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-09 05:15 PM


No, I've been on pip for a while. But I just started writing last year...

           {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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