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Agitation and Frustration

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 06-04-2008 10:59 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

I'm very impatient

I can't wait very long

I don't even know my own strength

But I know I'm not that strong

I can't stand when things take forever

Or when I'm running out of time

The things that hurt me most

God why do I always have to rhyme?

To hear people say my name in hatred

Or to say anything at all

Just to let it go one more time

Just to let it all fall

I'm frustrated with everything

So now please let me be

You'll never understand

You'll never see

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 06-04-2008 11:00 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Its about anger of course and being very impatient.

Kate

Britt_Brat
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2 posted 06-04-2008 06:32 PM       View Profile for Britt_Brat   Email Britt_Brat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Britt_Brat

its very good. at first I was some what confused but I get it now, and its a very good one

cut and bleeding

eternally_singing
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3 posted 06-04-2008 06:39 PM       View Profile for eternally_singing   Email eternally_singing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eternally_singing

I thought this was very good. It describes exactly how I feel at times.

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

voice2bheard
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4 posted 06-05-2008 09:06 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This is about letting out your anger and expressing how you feel. I'm glad you can relate to it.

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 12-16-2009 03:52 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

yea I still feel like this tons of times a day1! ugh!!

Kate

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