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voice2bheard
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Black eyes you never really even tried

They walk away

As tears are falling from your eyes

Don't forget to rememeber the day

When you let everything go

And your fears just went away

You stand alone, by a shadow in the dark

You look around, theres no sound

And you start to forget who you are

Just let it go

Walk away

And all of your emeotions will show everything that you have to say


Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 06-03-2008 01:31 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This poem is about forgiving yourself and being able to stand up for yourself!

Kate

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2 posted 06-03-2008 02:28 PM       View Profile for Falling rain   Email Falling rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Falling rain's Home Page   View IP for Falling rain

Wow this is good. Great write.


"It might be easy to fall for someone but it's also easy to break a heart." - Zach Booker.

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I thought it was a poem that touched my heart and I thank you for sharing. There's not a thing that I would change about it. There's a strong message you've just shown in this poem.
voice2bheard
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4 posted 06-04-2008 10:54 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like it and of course my point of my poems is to have you enjoy it or feel the emotions!!

Kate

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5 posted 12-16-2009 03:53 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

wow I feel old!! I can't believe I wrote it!! It's really short!!

Kate

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