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Newpoet
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2008-06-02 11:52 PM


I'm not sure if I am complete. I might fix a few things or write more, but this is what I have written so far:

The emptiness of delusional pasts,
The gaping hole of existence,
The destruction of the soul,

I was once a happy man,
But now, life has changed again,
My heart is torn apart,
Any purpose, that I once held true, has forgotten me,

I am numb with regret,
Sorrow,
Anger,
Pain,

The uncontrollable events of living,
Makes one welcome dying,
To be a puppet, on a string,

A missing piece of the puzzle,
The loss of unconditional affection,
The intense ache of humanity,

To know an incredible friend and father,
Almost super-human,
To lose their presence,
To lose the presence of myself,

To forget him,
The faded memory of love,
My worst fear,
My greatest pain.

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Written_In_Stone
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since 2008-06-03
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1 posted 2008-06-03 05:31 PM


It was a touching poem. I enjoyed reading it. It was shared some very strong emotion.
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