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The only heartbreaking words are none.
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The only heartbreaking words are none. |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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~I know this is probably the worst poem ever, but I had to write it sooner or later. And yeah, the title doesn't make sence but whatever. The only thing. The one thing that I could have. You took it. Ripped it out of my grasp and made it your own. You broke it. You stole it. And now what is left for me to have? My music? My art? My blood? You took my words and ground them up, smashed my heart into broken shards; too small to put back together. You make my blood flow, escaping from it's prison when I can't. So why do you get to feel good when I can't? Why is it that you don't understand? Nothing you do will fix me. Because you stole my words, broke my heart, and pushed me down. I've fallen so far, there is no trying to stand back up and fight. I will die alone and at the loss for words; bleeding. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} {~Emily~} |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
i don't think its bad. it's really good!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow Emily. This is good. And it does make sence. Maybe not to you but to me it made perfect sence to me. Great work.
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Well okay then...I'm glad you liked it. {~~*~~} {&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}} |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
On this, I agree. It made perfect sense and lacks nothing for poetic merit. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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