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If I tell you

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voice2bheard
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0 posted 05-30-2008 01:15 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

If I tell you

Would you tell me

everything that you have to say

I don't know how

If you know now

Will I ever be okay?

Its only one try

If I look in your eyes

And just let out what I have to say

If I tell you

Whats on my mind

Would you care

And what would you say?

And I've tried so hard

God I've come so far

To let you go

But should I let you know

I've tried to hate you

That never came true

Its so hard to let things go away

All the times we spent

I'll never regret

The times with you

I never thought they were true

I took things for granted

Never realized I had it

Until everything that just faded away

If I tell you

That I love you

Would you tell me how you feel

Or just turn away?

Kate

© Copyright 2008 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 05-30-2008 01:17 PM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

This has to be one of my favorites I ever wrote it truely brought out my emotions in this one. Hope someone likes it!

Kate

midnightdreamer
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2 posted 05-30-2008 10:43 PM       View Profile for midnightdreamer   Email midnightdreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for midnightdreamer

i don't just like it. i love it!!!! i'm sure others will too!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

eternally_singing
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3 posted 05-30-2008 11:32 PM       View Profile for eternally_singing   Email eternally_singing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for eternally_singing

Spectacular- I love it!

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

voice2bheard
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4 posted 06-02-2008 10:33 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

Thanks you guys I'm really glad you like it!! Like I said I'll try to write as much more as I can!!

Kate

wolfy09
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5 posted 05-14-2009 06:15 PM       View Profile for wolfy09   Email wolfy09   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wolfy09

i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!
voice2bheard
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6 posted 12-16-2009 04:00 AM       View Profile for voice2bheard   Email voice2bheard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit voice2bheard's Home Page   View IP for voice2bheard

WOW FROM MY LYRICS!!

Kate

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