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xTr3m3sT
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0 posted 2008-05-30 12:22 PM


I see through mirrors
I breathe through wounds
and I smell through flesh.

Do I deserve to die?

Do I deserve to live?

What is my purpose?
it doesn't make sense to me
the only thing I know of is pain.

Knives, blades, razors
they are not forgiving enough.

Even the graceful touch of mortis
will fail to release
my misery.

I see and taste my own blood
whenever I look at my disgusting reflection.

I look into my own eyes
it terrifies me, my eyes are empty
it shows the bitterness deep within me
something just wants to get out and escape
but I'm keeping it in.

If I was to let what is inside me escape
I will just be sealing my fate.

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1 posted 2008-05-30 12:56 PM


Wow this poem really speaks to me.. i know how you feel. great poem!  

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

MysticClear01
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2 posted 2008-05-31 12:04 PM


I reeally like this poem. It fits me so well at times. Good job!
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