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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-05-27 05:21 PM



Hallow footsteps chase my screams
right down to the very last drop
of blood. Dark corners and haunted
sleeps, suffocating in the darkness.
Rescue me from my own self defeat,
take me back to the sorrow of blood
shed that so dearly inspired me.


{~~*~~}


{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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1 posted 2008-05-28 09:29 AM


Yeah, this is dark. Really good.
Falling rain
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2 posted 2008-05-28 12:41 PM


this is really good Emily!!

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

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