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0 posted 2008-05-24 06:28 PM



If you dont need me
Then I dont need YOU
If you dont love me
Then I will stop loving you TOO
If you have moved on
See me heading toward that DOOR
Because its been too long now
And I cant get up off this FLOOR

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hiddensmiles
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at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-05-24 08:43 PM


i like this, good job here!!

JJ

shakalakaboomboom
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since 2008-05-19
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2 posted 2008-05-25 10:39 PM


wow! thats a good break up poem lol

                               ~Savana

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3 posted 2008-05-26 01:30 AM


lol...thats exactly where it came from. The worse break up of my life.
shakalakaboomboom
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4 posted 2008-05-26 11:17 AM


oh my god! I am soo sorry :/


ladylisa
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5 posted 2008-08-30 03:49 PM


Breakups are very hard, but once you take the first step, the second one gets easier and next thing you know you are running.  Good luck, lis
Revon
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6 posted 2008-08-31 08:35 PM


I just got out of a relationship after begging her to forgive me i decided it wasnt worth it, it wasnt even my fault. This poem fits so well.
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