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since 2008-05-13
Posts 47


0 posted 2008-05-23 01:17 AM


God I pray tonight
For a protection
Like never before
Over that girl
That you oogle over
She is me
The way I used to be
And you are a volture
Waiting for your prey
YOu did you once
And you will do it again
God god god how I pray
That your creepy paws would never touch her
I love her as a sister
You are just waiting to ruin her
LIke me
And countless ones before me
YOu are a creep
A loser too
YOu need to stop your games
And leave her
You manic fool
You use innocent people
To get your fix
Only problem is
She does not know you exist
I see what you do now
Over and over
You creepy sicko
Get a life
And leave her alone
I pray she never falls for you
You will ruin her too
Shes smarter than me
She stays away from you


Dont touch her...you dont deserve her and you know it. Grrrr


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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

1 posted 2008-06-11 09:05 PM


this is a great poem keep writing
Again
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since 2008-05-13
Posts 47

2 posted 2008-06-21 05:32 PM


You know its amazing how the poems you think are horrible, others think are great. And the ones you take your time on and work on a long time, people think they are okay or perhaps dont like them at all. It does not make sense but then again this is poetry and rules are out the door. Thanks for your comment.
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
3 posted 2008-06-23 09:01 PM


you are so true. but i love long poems. short ones are pretty great.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

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