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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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0 posted 2008-05-19 09:22 PM



See the pain
See the hurt
See the sorrow
What you see is only the outside
Look closer
Look at the girl
Don’t just push her away
Look past the ugly face
Look past the eyes
Look inside her
Look at what she goes through
“Go away”
This is what she has been told all her life
Tell her you’ll be there
When she cries
Keep her going
Keep reminding her that you wont push her aside
If you don’t see the beauty that lays there
Then you truly are blind
See the girl that was once there
See the smile that’s true
See the laugh that lies behind bars now
Now you see her
Crying from the pain and hurt
She’s changed so much
From the little girl you saw then
Who thought and believed that she could do anything
Who knew who she was
Now you see a girl’s broken dreams
The bright princess lies deep inside her
Now you see a dark princess takes her place
Comfort her, tell her she’s important
Then you can see the true girl that lies beneath
All the cruel pain and cold heart
Who despises everyone

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.

© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
Written_In_Stone
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since 2008-06-03
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1 posted 2008-06-03 05:35 PM


This is a topic I've always written about, but that was the best i've seen in a long time.
XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
2 posted 2008-06-03 05:40 PM


great write, I understand what you're talking about.

                   {~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
3 posted 2008-06-10 10:37 PM


thanks!! i wrote this about my oldest sister.

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

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