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0 posted 2008-05-14 12:03 PM



I give all of
myself to you,
'till there's
nothing left
to do.

But wait for you,
to see,
it's all
of me.

For you
I'm here,
and hope's
so near.

Can we make it?

Through?

With a little love,
and grace
from above,
we will get
it right,
tonight.

God bless us
and keep us,
from our sins.

I pray
we never do again,
what we know
will do us in.

You, your're my
favorite
feel.

At last,
I know
it's real.

Sleep well
my darling.
I love you.


© Copyright 2008 jason - All Rights Reserved
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since 2008-05-13
Posts 47

1 posted 2008-05-14 09:29 PM


This is really beautiful...it was like a shock wave when I first read it, it hit the deepest parts of me. Thank you for writing it....left like you were writing it to me...thats a sign of a great poet ya know.
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